Monday, August 31, 2015

How to Tame a Wild Tongue

Patrick Darling
English 1100
8-31-15
Prof. Young



How to Tame a Wild Tongue


     In the beginning of her story Anazaldua makes her connection of her past with a trip to the dentist, and how its hard for the dentist to work in her mouth because of her tongue being stubborn. This reflects how she was told to learn "American" speech, and to leave her old language, and essentially her culture behind. Her "stubbornness" still exists today with her writing as she still embraces her Chicano, Tex-Mex, etc language, still incorporating it into her speech and writing. It makes perfect sense why she does this too, why would she just try to write this in pure Spanish or English, when she is more comfortable using her language, even if some people (like me) might not get some of the words she used.

     To a pure Spanish speaker the Chicano Spanish might seem like the nonstandard version of Spanish. I makes them seem like they are being called inferior even though the Chicanos just throw different flairs and words from english into their language. Just like with Spanish, there are different types of English. It might not be as noticeable as Spanish but different kinds of English defines English speakers identity. We have British English, Australian English, different kinds of American English too, depending were you live like: East Cost, Mid-West, California/West Coast, etc. I am also part of a somewhat secret language, people that are aware or are know what the things me and my friends say would also get our "Nerd Speak." Examples being like, "Hey Dante, wanna go frag some scrubs later?" However I wouldn't talk like this to others as they most likely would not get it, people like my parents or teachers, unlike my friends who would get it. Otherwise I speak like East Coast American, so I wouldn't be speaking like a British person.

     "I am my language," means that the way you speak and the language you speak defines who you are. I'm not going to define myself as a for example as French, I don't know french, I would be defined as American, due to my very Americanish English that I speak. And that can be a part of my identity as when I speak that, people could tell that I'm most likely American with my American English. At the beginning of the story Anazaldua says how stubborn her tongue would be at the dentist, and it connects to the ending where she says how patient Chicanos are, and how they can hold on to their Chicano identity even after everything will rot out before they give up there language. Identity is important for everyone to have, identity is the reflection of you, who you are, how you act, what your interests are, and what makes you different from other people, Anazaldua would agree. In here school see was punished for using Spanish, were she was from, and then called a traitor for speaking english, even though thats whats spoken in the country. Being Chicano gave them the identity that they are a little of both but not the same as the two, they are unique.  


"So, if you want to really hurt me, talk badly about my language. Ethnic identity is twin skin to linguistic identity-I am my language."

"There existed a sense of shame at being caught listening to our music. Yet I couldn't stop my feet from thumping to the music, could not stop humming the word, nor hide from myself the exhilaration I felt when I heard it."

"Stubborn, persevering, impenetrable as stone yet possessing a malleability that renders us unbreakable."



Anzaldua, Gloria "How to Tame a Wild Tongue." Teaching Developmental Writing. Ed. Susan Naomi Bernstein. Fourth ed. New York : Bedford/St. Martin's, 2013. 245-255. Print.






Thursday, August 27, 2015

Getting to know me

Patrick Darling
English 1100
8-27-15
Prof. Young


Getting to know me



1. If you play a sport, what type of sport do you play? How long have you been playing this sport?

- I use to run Track and Field for Morris Hills High School for 3 years.

2. What are you passionate about? For example, in your free time, what do you enjoy doing the most?

- I am passionate about games, both traditional and video games, as well as drawing, more specifically cartoons.

3. What is you nickname and how did you get this name?

- My nickname was always just Pat or Darling, you can probably guess how. Some people did call me Gameboy on the track team, because I would always bring a Gameboy to our Track meets.

4. When you write do you just sit at the computer and allow the words to flow or do you have an outline?

- I usually just let the words flow, I feel as though it is sometimes a downfall for me however, since sometimes I will unintentionally repeat myself.

5. How would you describe your writing experience in high school? For example did your teachers allow you multiple times for you to revise your essays to earn a higher grade? Did you learn grammar rules and structure? Did you learn about the five paragraph structure?

- We were given a prompt, most of the time related to what we had read in book we had read and our essay was about that. Once we finished that was it, we turned it in for a final grade. When it comes to grammar and structure, everything sounds much better in my head, but the same sound doesn't make it to the paper. Almost every single essay I've wrote was in a 5 paragraph or less structure.

6. What type of music do you most listen to and who is your favorite band?

- My taste of music is always changing, I'll go from classic rock, to folk punk, and right now I am really into indie rock. With the different tastes of genres, same goes for favorite bands, right now following my indie rock trend, my favorite is Two Door Cinema Club.

7. Do you use social media and if so how often do you use social media: facebook, Twitter, Snap Chat, Instagram.

- I'm not big on any form of social media at all. I stopped using facebook 5 years ago, and there are only a select few people I actually Snap Chat.

8. What is most important for you to learn this semester?

- If we are talking about specifically writing class, then I really would like to improve my writing where I don't just lose myself while I'm writing it. However, if we just talking about any thing this semester it would be to learn more about programing since I am a Computer Science major.

9. Rate yourself as a writer: A, B, C or D. Explain why.

- C. I like writing when I am open to write whatever I like, more of stories, however, I struggle whenever I'm given a prompt, or an assignment where I am not allowed to give a lot of my creative side to shine. I also rush whenever I try to write, which makes my work sloppy.